Erin
What does the senior of members of a family advise their younger brother(or sister)? Hey, Do you have a sibling? I have a younger brother; he is 9 years younger than me. So, I have a question about good advise. From 14years, My younger brother had reached puberty. Anyway, I can't stand his lazy behaviors. He looks like passive person. But... He doesn't care about my concern. He might could think "stop nag!". I just want that he will be aggressive in his work. How can I advise my brother well? What is good way for advise to him? If you are, how will you talk for him?
2015년 3월 28일 오전 1:36
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What does How do the senior of members of a family advise their younger brother (or sister)?

Hey, do you have a sibling?
I have a younger brother; he is 9 years younger than me.
So, I have a question about good advice.

From 14years, My younger brother had reached puberty.

My younger brother reached puberty at 14 years old.
Anyway, I can't stand his lazy behaviors. He looks like a passive person.
But... he doesn't care about my concerns. He might could think "stop nag!".

I just want that he will for him to be aggressive in his work.
How can I advise my brother well? What is good way for advise to him?

If you are it were you, how will would you talk for him?

 

In general, really good work.  Some minor corrections.  However, an important one is that "advice" is the noun and "advise" is the verb.  "I advise the President" versus "I gave the President some advice".

 

You don't need a capital letter after a comma or ellipsis and you should always have a space before an opening bracket/parenthesis " (".

2015년 3월 30일
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What does the senior of members of a family advise their younger brother(or sister)?

Hey, Do you have a sibling?
I have a younger brother; he is 9 years younger than me.
So, I have a question about good advise.

From 14years, My younger brother had reached puberty.
Anyway, I can't stand his lazy behaviors. He looks like passive person.
But... He doesn't care about my concern. He might could think "stop nag!".

I just want that he would be aggressive in his work.
How can I advise my brother well? What is good way for advise to him?

If you are, how will you talk for him?

2015년 3월 28일
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