Alinne Moraes
New York City Guys, Good Afternnon! I hope everybody okay! I'm very happy because in the next year I'll travel to USA. Yesterday I got a Stop Over in NYC, it's so good! Today I'm reading about NYC, I need to learn how to get in Time Square and Statue of Liberty, I hope can! More a dream come true!
2015년 3월 28일 오후 5:33
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New York City

Hello Guys, Good Afternnon!
I hope everybody is okay!
I'm very happy because in the next year I'll travel to USA. Yesterday I got a stopover in NYC, it's so great!
Today I'm reading about NYC, I need to learn how to get to Times Square and to the Statue of Liberty, I hope I will be able to!

One more a dream comes true!

 

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I hope you enjoyed the time in New York city Aline!!  Keep up the regular discipline of writing in English! It is a great way to improve!!  You are giving me the inspiration to restart doing the same in Portuguese.  

 

2015년 3월 28일
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