David Coelho
First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello everyone. My name is David, I'm software engineer, from Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. I need to improve my english, because I'd like to get new job opportunities abroad. So, I am here to find people who is also learning languages and we could practice together. I am also available to help you with your portuguese learning.
2015년 3월 28일 오후 11:52
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone. My name is David. I'm software engineer. I come from Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. (Run-on sentences) I need to improve my English, because I'd like to get new job opportunities abroad.

So,(We usually don't start off a sentence tiyh "So", but it's not technically wrong) I am here to find people who are also learning languages and we could practice together.

I am also available to help you with your portuguese-learning.

2015년 3월 29일
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