Abood ^^
Tour Guide - Palestinian Student I live in Bethlehem city which is the birthplace of Jesus Christ. I am studying tour guiding so, I will be a tour guide. I like to be a tour guide because I like to meet people from all over the world.
2015년 3월 30일 오전 11:35
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Tour Guide - Palestinian Student

I live in the city of Bethlehem city which is the birthplace of Jesus Christ.
I am studying tour guiding so that I will can be a tour guide.
I would like to be a tour guide because I like to meet meeting people from all over the world.

 

<em>You can make the second sentence simpler by saying: "I am studying to be a tour guide." </em>

<em>Using the word "meeting" instead of "to meet" is slightly better because it shows a continuous action. Good luck!</em>

2015년 3월 31일
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