Maraya
Summer It's the first day of summer, I just graduated from grade 6, now this summer, I don't want to play outside like the other kids do, I want to study languages such as Italian and Korean, I hope here, they can teach me more other languages like Russian and Swedish, any language will do and I hope I make new friends :)
2015년 3월 31일 오전 5:42
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Hi Maraya! Here, I did some corrections for you :)

Summer

It's the first day of summer, I just graduated from grade 6. Now This summer I don't want to play outside like the other kids do, I want to study languages such as Italian and Korean. I hope here they can teach me I can learn more other languages like Russian and Swedish, any language will do, and I hope I will make new friends :)

 

2015년 3월 31일
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