Svetlana
What is loneliness? How did I spend last Sunday? I was alone. No cinema, no cafe, no shopping, no friends, no kids, no husband. All by myself. Was I bored? Did I feel lonely? No. It was my own day, nobody else's. I felt happy and calm. Really, sometimes it is nesessary to stay alone, to do nothing, to care about nobody. Just you yourself. Do you sometimes feel the same? Do you need to stay alone? Not because you feel sad and do not want anybody to disturb you, but just because you are happy being alone? What is loneliness? Loneliness is a strange thing. You can feel lonely in the crowd, you can feel lonely with people who are supposed to be your friends, but you can just be all alone and do not feel lonely at all.
2015년 3월 31일 오전 6:45
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What is loneliness?

How did I spend last Sunday? I was alone. No cinema, no cafe, no shopping, no friends, no kids, no husband. All by myself. Was I bored? Did I feel lonely? No. It was my own day, nobody else's. I felt happy and calm. Really, sometimes it is nesessary to stay alone, to do nothing, to care about nobody. Just you (possibly add a comma here) yourself. Do you sometimes feel the same? Do you need to stay alone? Not because you feel sad and do not want anybody to disturb you, but just because you are happy being alone? What is loneliness? Loneliness is a strange thing. You can feel lonely in the crowd, you can feel lonely with people who are supposed to be your friends, but you can just also be all alone and do not feel lonely at all.

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Your English is very good! :)  I agree with your observations no loneliness as well.

2015년 3월 31일
Sometimes all of us need to stay alone and at that time we can understan took parting events more clearly.e.I liked your thoughts about loneliness
2015년 3월 31일
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