Joy Kang
April 2
Today is very hot !Let me and friends feel uncomfortable.so we go to convenience store when lunch time,because we need some cool drinks!!!
2015년 4월 2일 오전 7:41
교정 · 2
2
April 2
Today is very hot !Let me and friends feel uncomfortable.so we go to convenience store when lunch time,because we need some cool drinks!!!
Correction:
Today is very hot! My friends and I felt uncomfortable, so we went to the convenience store at lunchtime because we needed some cool drinks!!!
Not bad!
2015년 4월 2일
더 빨리 진행하고 싶나요?
이 학습 커뮤니티에 참여하고 무료로 연습해보세요!
Joy Kang
언어 구사 능력
중국어(북경어), 중국어(대만어), 영어
학습 언어
영어
좋아할 수도 있는 읽을거리
Doing Quizzes is a Good Way to Learn a Second Language… True or False?
22 좋아요 · 5 댓글
Navigating Global Business: The Power of Business English, Cultural Sensitivity, and Career Advancement Strategies
15 좋아요 · 6 댓글
10 Strategies to Keep Young Learners Involved in Your italki Classes
47 좋아요 · 21 댓글
다른 읽을거리
