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olive的小作文: Apr 22, 2010 Today I watched a movie called Julie and Julia. Actually it's not the first time I watched it, but it's still interesting to see. It did reminds me of a blog site that I used to go to, which I don't go anymore. And writting blog could be a fun thing to do, like Julie said, it gives you one thing to do everyday, one day at a time. And now I don't really feel like keep writting because my eyes are watering for no reason. Well, maybe there's a reason, but I just don't know. (probably allergy)

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olive的小作文: Apr 22, 2010

Today I watched a movie called "Julie and Julia". Actually it's not the first time I have watched it, but it's still interesting to see. It did reminds me of a blog site that I used to go to, but which I don't go to anymore. And writting Writing a blog could be a fun thing to do, like Julie said, because it gives you one something to do everyday, one day at a time. And nNow though I don't really feel like keep continuing to writting write because my eyes are watering for no reason. Well, maybe there's there is a reason, but I just don't know it. (probably an allergy)

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Notes:

- the word "blog" does not require "site"

- don't begin sentences with "And"

- "writing" has only one t

- "there is", instead of "there's", for emphasis

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