About my this week Although I was busy in this week ,I successfuly did two experiments. Moreover, I registered in this website and made friends with some people. How about your week?

angela wang

2015년 4월 18일 오후 3:12

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About my this week

Although I was busy in this week ,I successfuly did two experiments. Moreover (1), I registered in for this website and made friends with some people.
How about your week?

(1) 'Moreover' is an old style word, and now is only used in formal writing. Here I would use 'also':

'I also registered for this website...'

2015년 4월 19일

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