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Please correct these sentences 1. He was healed by the best doctors in the hospital, afterwards his damages revived. 2. The annual average revenue of this company was doubled. 3. My vulnerable spot is a compassion to stray dogs. 4. I ruminated about the last issue and afterwards I made the right decision. 5. I am too subtle person being in such mess. 6. I was a significant cause to yell on the toddler. 7. I made a new record in my intimate diary.
2015년 4월 18일 오후 7:37
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В четвёртом предложении, Ваше употребление слова "ruminate" совсем правильно. А я бы выбрал предлог "over". I ruminated over the last issue, and .....
2015년 4월 20일

Please correct these sentences

1. He was healed by the best doctors in the hospital, afterwards his damages revived.

      . . and he recovered from his injuries

2. The annual average revenue of this company was doubled.

     The average annual revenue of . .

 
3. My vulnerable spot is a compassion to stray dogs.

     My weakness is a soft spot for stray dogs


4. I ruminated about the last issue and afterwards I made the right decision.

     I thought about . .


5. I am too subtle person being in such mess.

     I am too smart/clever to be in such a mess


6. I was a significant cause to yell on the toddler.

    I had a good reason to yell at the toddler.


7. I made a new record in my intimate diary.

    I made a new entry in my private diary.

2015년 4월 18일
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