Trying to learn In my view everyone want to be succeed in his life.Money,happiness, good health ,safety and etc.Someone said to me that 'Nobody's Perfect'.I agree with this expression.Some people want

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Trying to learn In my view everyone want to be succeed in his life.Money,happiness, good health ,safety and etc.Someone said to me that 'Nobody's Perfect'.I agree with this expression.Some people want to be a perfect person.Don't want to be a loser although you know that when you did something,you probably fail sometime.Finally in my opinion you will adapt yourself with that situation.Try to be the best on wherever as good as you can do it. Don't give up and just do it!

2015년 4월 19일 오전 8:15

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In my view everyone wants to succeed in life. Money, happiness, good health ,safety etc. Someone said to me 'Nobody's Perfect'. I agree with this expression. Some people want to be perfect. Don't want to be a loser although you know that when you do something,you will probably fail sometimes. Finally, in my opinion you will adapt yourself to your situation.Try to be the best wherever you can and as good as you can do it.

Don't give up and just do it!!

Good work. Two spaces after a full stop, one space after a comma.

2015년 4월 26일

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