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Self introduction Hello everybody.I am Star .I can speak Chinese.And I have learning English for many years,learning Korean for 3years.I like make friends.And I am a Chinese broadcaster , If you have any question about Chinese you can ask me. And I 'm glad to help U
2015년 4월 21일 오전 4:26
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Self introduction

Hello everybody.I am Star .I can speak Chinese.And I have been learning English for many years and learning Korean for 3 years.I like make friends and I am a Chinese broadcaster. If you have any question about Chinese you can ask me. And I would be glad to help you.

 

 

 

2015년 4월 21일
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Self introduction

Hello everybody, my name is (it's better) Star. I can speak Chinese, and I have been learning English for many years and learning Korean for 3 years. I like  to make friends and I am a Chinese broadcaster. If you have any question about Chinese you can ask me and I'll be glad to help you (: good luck learning English <3 

2015년 4월 21일

Self introduction

Hello everybody.My name is Star .I can speak Chinese.And I have learning English for many years,learning Korean for 3years.I like make friends.And I am a Chinese broadcaster , If you have any question about Chinese you can ask me. And I 'm glad to help U

2015년 4월 21일
Your sentences are very simple. For example, Hello everybody. My name is Star and I am able to speak Chinese. This sounds better in English
2015년 4월 21일
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