Andrew Zhao
Attend a "Foreign Language" Class Recently I realized that learning foreign languages just by myself does not work. No matter how many words and grammatical rules I memorize, I still can not master them without speaking, which will make me feel crestfallen and feel boring about learning. So I spent about 4.000 RMB and attended a "Foreign Language" class for 3 years, during the valid time I'll be allowed to learn 5 different languages, including German, Japanese, French, Korean and Spanish if I want. Good deal isn't it? I'll attempt to learn ASAP to learn all the 5 languages. So funny!
2015년 4월 22일 오전 2:10
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Attending a "Foreign Language" Class

Recently I realized that learning foreign languages by myself just does not work. No matter how many words and grammatical rules I memorize, I still can not master them without speaking which makes me feel discouraged and bored with learning. So I spent about 4,000 RMB to attend a "Foreign Language" class for 3 years. During that time, I'll be allowed to learn 5 different languages including German, Japanese, French, Korean, and Spanish. It's a good deal, isn't it? I'll attempt to learn all 5 languages as soon as possible. So fun!

 

Nicely done. I've never seen "crestfallen" outside a book so I changed it to "discouraged". Other than that, there were very minor punctuation and verb tense issues. 加油! 

2015년 5월 14일
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