Minh Thuong
begin study Norwaygian Hello. I'm here for learning norwaygian and hope can meet somebody want to learning vietnamese language and I can learning this language.
2015년 4월 25일 오전 1:08
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I begin to study/I begin learning Norwaygian

Hello. I'm here for learning Norwegian and hope to meet somebody that wants to learning Vietnamese language and I can learning this language.

 

Red: correction

1. begin to do or begin doing

2. when referring to country or nationality, in formal writting, the first letter of every word should be capitalized

3. want to do/ want to doing

4. someone can do/ someone can doing

Blue: suggestion

2015년 4월 25일

Start study the start to study Norwaygian Norwegian

Hello. I'm here for learning norwaygian Norwegian, and I hope I can meet somebody who wants to learning learn vietnamese language. and I can learning teach this language.

 

xin chào cách bạn!

*remember it's "Norwegian", not Norwaygian"

** Please write in Norwegian next time.

2015년 4월 25일
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