Rachelle
Ohayou~ Kyou watashi wa koohii o nomimashita. (Today I drank coffee.) Koohii wa oishii. (The coffee was delicious.) Please correct me on any mistakes! I put in parenthesis what I was attempting to say if you know English, too! Feedback is appreciated.
2015년 4월 26일 오후 2:48
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Ohayou~

(おはよう~)

Kyou watashi wa koohii wo nomimashita. (Today I drank coffee.)

(きょう わたし は コーヒー を のみました。)

(今日、私はコーヒーを飲みました。)

 

Koohii wa oishii katta desu. (The coffee was delicious.)

(コーヒー は おいしかった です。)

(コーヒーは美味しかったです。)


Please correct me on any mistakes! I put in parenthesis what I was attempting to say if you know English, too! Feedback is appreciated.

2015년 4월 26일

Ohayou~

Kyou watashi wa koohii o nomimashita. (Today I drank coffee.)
Koohii wa oishii. (The coffee was delicious.)

Please correct me on any mistakes! I put in parenthesis what I was attempting to say if you know English, too! Feedback is appreciated.

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It's grammatically good, but I'd recommend sticking to one form when writing. Here, you are combining 『~ます/~です』 (formal form) and plain/dictionary form (no です or ます)

2015년 4월 26일
Just a copy paste from your previous questions comment field: I also recommend starting to write in at least Hiragana. To avoid copying and pasting them from other places, just activate a Japanese keyboard layout. Just google "microsoft additional keyboard languages" (without the quotation marks) and add your operative system to the phrase and voilã, you get instructions on how to do so directly from Microsoft. And later on when you have added a JP keyboard layout, you can quickly switch between it and the normal one with the language bar (it's normally attached to your taskbar and right next to the clock) or by pressing the Windows key + spacebar. Hope these instructions help and sorry for not being able to format them properly.
2015년 4월 26일
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