Jolie
It took me two hours to write an essay Today it took me around two hours to write an essay. I didnt know what to write and how to write, so I spent a lot of time to read related essays and search information on the Internet. Finally my essay ws done, and I felt proud of myself. Even it took me very long time to finish an essay, but it was a good work. All I need to do is practice, practice and practice.
2015년 4월 27일 오후 6:07
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"It took me two hours to write an essay

Today it took me around two hours to write an essay. I didn't know what to write and how to write, so I spent a lot of time to reading related essays and searching information on the Internet. Finally my essay ws done, and I felt proud of myself. Even if it took me a very long time to finish an essay, it was all worth it. All I need to do is practice, practice and practice."

 

Well done. As they say, "Practice makes perfect"!

2015년 4월 27일
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