Jenny
Got Milked? For example, pumpkin seed is obviously a better choice of magnesium intake and two teaspoons of dried and ground basil powder have an equivalent amount of calcium for a glass of milk.
2015년 4월 28일 오전 12:53
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Got Milked?

For example, pumpkin seed is obviously a better choice of magnesium intake, and two teaspoons of dried and ground basil powder have an equivalent amount of calcium for a glass of milk.

 

I felt this sentence ran on a little too long and there should be a pause somewhere to catch your breath. Otherwise it looks great.

2015년 4월 28일
Hehe it sure is. I heard US government heavily marketed milk to meet the nutritional needs of troops who were dispatched overseas during world war II by including milk in school lunches and send the message that milk is the perfect food, which is totally not true.
2015년 4월 28일
Wow, did not know this at all. Interesting.
2015년 4월 28일
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