Alberto
Milan 1 may In this day there is the opening day of EXPO. In milan there is a lot of people of around the world and I'd like to have fun.
2015년 5월 1일 오후 5:01
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Milan - 1st May 2015

Today is the opening of EXPO in milan. There will be a lot of people from around the world and I'd like to go and have fun there.

2015년 5월 1일

Milan 1 may

In this day there is the opening day of EXPO. In milan there is a lot of people of around the world and I'd like to have fun.

 

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Milan, 1 May

 

Today is the opening day of EXPO.  In Milan, there are a lot of people from around the world and I'd like to have fun.  (Non so esattamente che tu significa con la fase "and I'd like to have fun."  Questa fase non è veramente conessa alla fase "there are a lot of people from around the world.")

 

Jim Gallagher

2015년 5월 4일
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