Cem
hi everyone Hi everyone, i am happy to be here, i want to practice for my english, and i am started to study russian language, we can share our language, we can help each of us, thank you
2015년 5월 6일 오전 10:11
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Hello Cem,

Great entry! Please find my corrections below.

 

Original:

hi everyone

 

Hi everyone, i am happy to be here, i want to practice for my english, and i am started to study russian language, we can share our language, we can help each of us, thank you

 

Edited:

hi everyone

Hi everyone, I am happy to be here. I want to practice my English. I'm also studying Russian. we can share our languages, and we can help each other. Thank you

 

Notes:

Really nice job on your entry, Cem. A few rules to keep an eye out for:

1) In English, all language names (Russian, English, Japanese) should be capitalized.

2)"i" should always be capitalized to appear as "I." 

 

Let me know if you have any questions about my other corrections! I look forward to helping you with your studies.

 

Best,

Charlie

 

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