Golden Week The consecutive days off end today.The consecutive holidays in early May called Golden Week in Japan. Golden week is crowded everywhere,roads,shops and leisure facilities.I don't like a c

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Golden Week The consecutive days off end today.The consecutive holidays in early May called Golden Week in Japan. Golden week is crowded everywhere,roads,shops and leisure facilities.I don't like a crowded place.So I relaxed at my home. I'll work hard again from tomorrow.

2015년 5월 6일 오전 11:57

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Golden Week

The consecutive days off from the Japan's Golden Week holiday in early May end today.The consecutive holidays in early May called Golden Week in Japan.
Golden week is crowded everywhere; roads, shops and leisure facilities. I don't like a crowded places, so I relaxed at my home.
I'll work hard again from tomorrow.

2015년 5월 6일

Golden Week

The consecutive days off end today. The consecutive holidays in early May are called Golden Week in Japan.

During the Ggolden week, it is crowded everywhere: roads, shops and leisure facilities. I don't like a crowded places. So I spent the holiday relaxinged at my home.

I'll start working hard again from tomorrow.

Just in case you might not notice this from the changes I've made, there should be a space after every punctuation marks (such as "," and ".").

2015년 5월 6일

There's nothing wrong with the phrase "the consecutive days off end to day". But it's not something you would hear a native speaker say. I think a native speaker is more likely to say "Golden Week ends today" or "today is the last day of Golden Week" instead.

2015년 5월 10일

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