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Correct the mistakes, please! Draco Draco the Athenian legislator,his extremely harsh laws provided only the one punishment - death, for insignificant violations and grave crimes, which perfected in Athens. His name is connecting with everything are cruel and are ruthless now. Draco's some was dated 621 year B.C, it wasn't the first written Athenian code of laws, but maybe it was the first comprehensive the code. Later time Solon canceled Draco's code and issueded new law, he left the punishment for murder.

2015년 5월 15일 오후 3:30

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Draco

Draco, the Athenian legislator, provided only one punishment for his extremely harsh laws--death. This punishment for insignificant violations and grave crimes was perfected in Athens. His name is now connected with everything cruel and ruthless.

Draco's code of laws was dated 621 B.C. It wasn't the first Athenian code of laws ever written, but it may have been the first comprehensive code.

In later times, Solon canceled Draco's code and issued new laws. He left the death penalty for murderers.

2015년 5월 15일

Thank you very much!

2015년 5월 16일

The adjective "draconian" comes from the name Draco. "Draconian" means "extremely harsh." Therefore, you can speak of "draconian laws," "draconian punishments," "draconian discipline," "a draconian government," "draconian budget cuts," etc. etc.

2015년 5월 16일

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