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SMALL WRITING Could you correct my post, please? Many thanks in advance I wan in central part of Moscow. I saw a strange figure - many-many huge pencils. Between these huge pencils there were paintings by young orphans. As it appeared it was an exhibitions of paintings devoted to the Victory Day. Unfortunately, I couldn't take all paintings at this exhibition as my phone camera ran out of space. I visited an ancient church. There are two famous wonder-making icons. It is a miraculous icon of Virgin Mary.
2015년 5월 27일 오후 7:09
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SHORT WRITING Could you correct my post, please? Many thanks in advance

I wan in the central part of Moscow. I saw a strange figure - many, many huge pencils. Between these huge pencils there were paintings by young orphans. It appeared to be an exhibitions of paintings devoted to the Victory Day. Unfortunately, I couldn't take pictures of all the paintings at this exhibition as my phone's camera ran out of space.
I visited an ancient church. There are two famous, awe-inspiring icons. It is a miraculous icon of Virgin Mary.

2015년 5월 27일
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