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Swim day! The day is great day! I say you why? because I go to the pool by my family. I like swim so much. I wish to be a beautiful day and the weather is snug.
2015년 5월 29일 오전 4:01
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Swim day!

The day is great day! I say you why? because I go to the pool by my family. I like swim so much. I wish to be a beautiful day and the weather is snug.

 

Today is a great day. Why? Because I am going to the pool with my family. I like to swim so much. I hope it is a beautiful day and the weather is fine.

Today is a great day. I'll tell you why. Because I will go to the pool with my family. I hope it is a beautiful day and the weather is warm. (...and the weather is nice.)

Today is a great day because I am going...

2015년 5월 29일
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Swim day!

Today is a great day! I hear you ask why? Because I went to the pool with my family. I like swimming so much. Especially when it's a beautiful day and the weather is warm.

 

 

2015년 5월 29일

Swim day!

Today is a great day! I'll tell you why? because I will go to the pool by my family. I like swim so much. I hope it is a beautiful day and the weather is warm.

2015년 6월 9일

Swim day!

Today is great day! I'll tell you why? because I will go to the pool by my family. I like swim so much. I hope it a beautiful day and the weather is warm.

2015년 6월 9일
Thanks rebecca.
2015년 5월 29일
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