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Rock'n'roll On May 20 in my home town there was a comedy contest between subdivisions of our Mining Metallurgical Combinat. My team called "Bullions of society" and the members of the team are just workers of the Combinat (except me :) I just helped them with the script and performed with them). The main part of my notice is the final song. I remade the song "Highway to Hell" by AC/DC onto my native language - Russian and the song was about our Combinat. So, when the song started I straight decided to behave like a real rock star and shaked my head :) It was the first time I did it on the stage in front of 700 people. Actually, whenI was a child my father always listened to rock'n'roll music and I always came into the centre of the room and shaked my head. I guess that my childhood was very useful concerning my performance :) We achieved honorable second place on this contest :) Well done! :) P.S. I'm in a blue-green dress shaking my head. Ahahaha...)
2015년 5월 29일 오후 7:19
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Rock'n'roll

On May 20 in my home town there was a comedy contest between subdivisions of our Mining Metallurgical Combinat. My team is called "Bullions of society" and the members of the team are just workers of the Combinat (except me :)  I just helped them with the script and performed with them).

The main part I played was the final song. I rewrote the song "Highway to Hell" by AC/DC into my native language - Russian and the song was about our Combinat. So, when the song started I  decided to behave like a real rock star straight away and started shaking my head :) It was the first time I had ever done it on the stage in front of 700 people. Actually, when I was a child my father always listened to rock'n'roll music and I always came into the centre of the room and shook my head. I guess that my childhood was very useful concerning my performance :)

We achieved honorable second place on this contest :) Well done! :)
P.S. I'm in a blue-green dress shaking my head. Ahahaha...)

 

Hello Giza,

Congratulations on your performance, just a few small corrections. Well done.

2015년 6월 11일

Rock'n'roll

On May 20 in my home town there was a comedy contest between subdivisions of our Mining Metallurgical Combinat. My team was called "Bullions of society" and the members of the team were are all just workers of the Combinat (except me :) I just helped them with the script and performed with them).

The main part I played was of my notice? is the final song. I remade the song "Highway to Hell" by AC/DC into onto my native language, - Russian and the song was about our Combinat. So, when the song started, I straight decided to behave like a real rock star and shaked my head :) It was the first time I did it on the stage in front of 700 people. Actually, when I was a child my father always listened to rock'n'roll music and I always came into the centre of the room and shaked my head. I guess that my childhood was very useful concerning my performance :)

We achieved a very honorable second place in on this contest :) Well done! :)
P.S. I'm in a blue-green dress shaking my head. Ahahaha...)

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I'm just nitpicking really. Your English is really good! I hope that one day, my Russian will be as good as your English. 

Well done! 

2015년 6월 11일
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