Mia
I cleaned my room. I cleaned a room spick and span. I recycle papers and threw away things I don't need. I vacuumed and then swept my room. So my room is very clean. I'm happy. Feeling accomplished. :D However, I'm hungry....... I want to eat some fruits...but It's too late. T_T
2015년 5월 30일 오후 4:20
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I cleaned my room.

I cleaned my room spick and span.
I recycled papers and threw away things I don't need.
I vacuumed and then swept my room.
So my room is very clean. I'm happy. Feeling accomplished. :D
However, I'm hungry....... I want to eat some fruits...but It's too late. T_T

 

 

Good job.

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2015년 5월 30일

I Cleaned my Room.

I cleaned my (a) room so it is spick and span.
I recycled papers and threw away things I didn't (don't) need.
I vacuumed and then swept my room.
So my room is very clean. I'm happy. Feeling it was a job well done. (accomplished.) :D
However, I'm hungry....... I want to eat some fruits...but it's too late. T_T

 

Good phraseology. 

2015년 5월 30일

I cleaned my room.

I cleaned a my/the room spick and span.
I recycled papers and threw away things I don't need.
I vacuumed and then swept my room.
So my room is very clean. I'm happy. Feeling accomplished. :D
However, I'm hungry....... I want to eat some fruits...but It's too late. T_T

 

<em>Well written entry. I agree with Andrés Romero that it's never too late to eat fruit :) And I think fruit is the type of food that is considered to be good for you and healthy to snack on. Therefore, without additional clarification, the last sentence sounds a bit confusing. Is it too late because you are on a diet? Is it too late to go out a buy fruit?</em>

2015년 5월 30일
haha. I mean, time to eat something is late.....:D
2015년 6월 3일
Too late to eat fruits? Never! :D
2015년 5월 30일
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