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Installing CCTV cameras in a public places. advantages and disadvantages No one can deny that installing cameras in public place has both merits and demerits, in this essay i will try to discuss the both argue. Firstly, let's talk about the positive sides of installing cameras in public places, no doubt that people will feel more safe if they found themselves under monitoring of these cameras, for example installing cameras in retail shops, malls, or in a governmental places will make criminal person to think twice before committing any offender behavior,in addition, the normal people attitude will be more adjusted if they knows that everybody is being monitored. Secondly, people might install these cameras in front of their houses to prevent burglary as these camera is directly connected to police station. On the other hand the responsible authorities to install such new monitoring system ought to install this cameras in a proper location, for instance installing this cameras inside fitting room to prevent stealing the clothes is inappropriate action,however, if the owner of the shop want to protect his goods he might add another security system except any type of system which might breach the individual privacy. In conclusion, even people privacy is dispensable but security of people and their property are more important.
2015년 6월 11일 오후 5:44
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No one can deny that installing cameras in public places has both merits and demerits, in this essay I will try to discuss the both arguments


Firstly, let's talk about the positive sides of installing cameras in public places, no doubt that people will feel more safe if they find themselves under the monitoring of these cameras, for example installing cameras in retail shops, malls, or in a governmental places will make criminals think twice before committing any offense. In addition, the normal people's attitude will change if they know that everybody is being monitored.

Secondly, people might install these cameras in front of their houses to prevent burglary, as this camera is directly connected to a police station.

On the other hand the authorities responsible for installing such new monitoring systems ought to install these cameras in a proper location, for instance installing this cameras inside a fitting room to prevent stealing the clothes is an inappropriate action, however, if the owner of the shop wants to protect his goods he might add another security system except for any type of system which might breach the individual privacy.

In conclusion, even personal privacy is dispensable, but people's security and their property are more important.

2015년 6월 11일
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