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Holiday
I had a very fulfilling day today.
Spent the morning in the beauty salon, then went fishing with friends in the afternoon.
I did not catch anything. I'm not sure what "www" is, it may be a Japanese equivalent of "LOL"?
I am happily drinking with friends now!♪
Thinking of the udon I'll be enjoying later. (#^.^#)
I had a lot of fun today, and a good holiday to everyone! (^ ^)♪
Tomorrow is another day
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明日は明日の風が吹く
(Ashitaha ashitano kazegafuku)
Not bad, but remember that that many line breaks and emoticons looks unnatural in English. A better-looking version would be:
I had a very fulfilling day today. Spent the morning in the beauty salon, then went fishing with friends in the afternoon. I did not catch anything. I am happily drinking with friends now! Thinking of the udon I'll be enjoying later.
I had a lot of fun today, and a good holiday to everyone! (^ ^)♪
But by all means use emoticons when chatting casually with friends! (^.^)
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