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I'm an indoor kind of guy. I spend most of my time at home because I'm a bit of an introvert and do not do well in group settings. That said, I prefer eating at home over dining at a restaurant. A few reasons why I prefer eating at home:
1. I find it to be much cleaner. Since I can see how the food is prepared, I am assured of its cleanliness, which I am keen on. In a restaurant, there is no guarantee that the food was prepared properly.
2. Eating at home is fun because I can help my family with the preparation and the cooking. I can also spend more quality time with them, which is very enjoyable for me!
Most of what you wrote is okay as-is. Here are a few things, however:
and this assure me cleanliness
and this assures me of its cleanliness
This also means that you'll be spending more quality time with your family and for me that's a very enjoyable family bonding.
This also means that you'll be spending more quality time with your family, and for me, that's very enjoyable.
For these reasons, I prefer eating at home than eating at the restaurant.
For these reasons, I prefer eating at home over eating at a restaurant.
(prefer this over that)
(prefer one over the other)
because...
(this is better than that)
(one is better than the other)
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