Kim DongHyun
Tuesday 30 june Already last second day of June came. I was in Korea that time always I had felt time is slow. But now I have felt is like a arrow. Almost two months when I arrived in Australia. Now my English is better then first day. But still I am not satisfy it to myself.
2015년 6월 30일 오후 12:42
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Tuesday, June 30

Already At last(,) THE second day of June HAS COME. I was in Korea AT that time(.) I HAD always FELT THAT time is slow. But now I FEEL THAT IT IS LIKE AN arrow. Almost two months AGO I arrived in Australia. Now my English is better then IT WAS ON THE first day(,) but I still am not satisfIED WITH myself.

2015년 6월 30일
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