Natalia P
Be old or not to be old What a contradiction! Everybody wants to reach an old age but nobody wants to be older. Surgeries, gym, anti-aging creams, injections, lot of equipment to avoid wrinkles… Lot of time spent in physical appearance. When the years can’t be hidden, about in the fifties/sixties, people looks like adolescents but not because of their bodies if not because of their brains. An adult with an adolescent brain is more disgusting than some wrinkles in the face.
2015년 7월 1일 오후 7:36
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To be old or not to be old

What a contradiction! Everybody wants to reach an old age but nobody wants to be older.
Surgeries, gym, anti-aging creams, injections, lots of equipment to avoid wrinkles… Lots of time spent in physical appearance.
When the years can’t be hidden, about in the fifties/sixties, people looks like adolescents but not because of their bodies if not because of their brains. (í am not sure what you are trying to say with this sentence - I will add a comment).  An adult with an adolescent brain is more disgusting than some wrinkles on the face.

2015년 7월 1일
When the years can’t be hidden, about in the fifties/sixties, people looks like adolescents but not because of their bodies if not because of their brains. i think you mean something like - "when aging normally becomes obvious, in the 50's or 60's, people can make themselves look younger through these various methods . But," an adult with an adolescent brain is more disgusting than some wrinkles on the face.
2015년 7월 1일
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