Emma
Music Music comforts people and sometimes encourages people. Music always has its own specil story which is facinating to people who want to dig up. From very early age, I started to love music. When I was very young, I frequently listened to my favorite music from dusk to night, which I enjoyed very much. Till now, I often remember aftertaste of the fansing experience. I am so grateful that I love music because it makes me a softer person, and teaches me be sensitive and admire to the beautiful things in the world.
2015년 7월 2일 오전 12:25
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Music

Music comforts people and sometimes can encourage people. Each piece of music has its own special story, which is fascinating to people who want to uncover it. From a very early age, I have loved music. When I was very young, I often listened to my favorite music from dawn to dusk. *Til now, I often remember aftertaste of the fansing experience. I am so grateful that music is a part of my life because it makes me a softer person and teaches me be sensitive and admire the beautiful things in the world.

 

*Til now, I often remember aftertaste of the fansing experience. (I'm not sure what you mean here. What do you mean by "fancing"?

2015년 7월 2일
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