A.Wah
Lost2 A place that I've looking for, There is beautiful scene that I've looked forward;There is no human's protest and struggle there. Perhaps's different from this money's world. Someone I want to be, He willing obedient to this social's rules;It's not much complaint for him to live in the world. But he knows that he can't ,and the pain would remain around him always, day by day.....
2015년 7월 2일 오전 4:04
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Lost2

There is* a place that I've been* looking for,.*There is beautiful scene that I've looked forward.*There is no human's protests* and or* struggles* there. Perhaps's it's* different from this money's world run by money.* Someone The person* I want to be, He is* willingly* obedient to this these* social's rules;It's There's* not much complainting* for him to live in the this* world. But he knows that he can't, and that* the pain would remain around him always, day by after* day.....

 

I tried my best correcting this story. I hope I did not change what you were trying to say.

2015년 7월 2일
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