My Day Just wanted to try and write something that happened in my day today and see if it makes sense to people :) 田中さんは私に写真を表示しました。 Does that make sense? What do you think I'm trying to say and

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My Day Just wanted to try and write something that happened in my day today and see if it makes sense to people :) 田中さんは私に写真を表示しました。 Does that make sense? What do you think I'm trying to say and could I improve it? Thanks in advance!!

2015년 7월 3일 오전 2:12

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田中さんは私に写真を表示し見せてくれました。 ※表示する is a stiff word. 見せるshow＋てくれる(someone gives me/us a favor)

2015년 7월 3일

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