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Today My name is Mai , I'd like to learn English , I'd like to be good in writing and speaking .today I went to make shopping with my sister's children. I bought pair of chose.
2015년 7월 4일 오후 10:00
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Today

My name is Mai , I'd like to learn English , I'd like to be good in writing and speaking .t Today I went to make shopping with my sister's children. I bought pair of chose.

Ok, but don't forget to write articles. They're so important in Englsih. 

Carefully with your spelling.

 

If you need my English classes, feel free to go to my profile and take a look at the calendar. That's how you're going to let me know when are you going to be free to have a class with me.

 

Hope to see you soon. 

2015년 7월 5일
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Today

My name is Mai. I'd like to learn English, I'd like to be good at writing and speaking. Today I went shopping with my sister's children. I bought a pair of shoes.

 

Hope this helps! :)

2015년 7월 4일

Today

My name is Mai , I'd like to learn English , I'd like to be good in writing and speaking .today I went shopping with my sister's children. I bought pair of chose???

 

I didn't understand last sentence ;)

2015년 7월 4일
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