Ich bin ein neuer Deutsch Schuler Deutschschüler. Better: "Ich habe gerade angefangen Deutsch zu lernen." = I've just started to learn German. You wanted to say "I'm new to learning German", didn't you? Sorry, there's no way of translating that into a normal German sentence.

Ich bin sehr ein ganz neuer Schüler im in Deutsch, meine mein Deutsch ist sehr schlecht (Ich will sehr gut lernen Deutsch lernen Sehr gut)

Nice try, please don't give up, will you? After a while it's not that hard, I promise! ;)

I understand that you may not have our crazy letters with the little dots on, but please just change ä to ae, ö to oe and ü to ue (Schüler = Schueler). That way it's still correct. If you don't, it'll always be seen as a mistake, sorry.