2015-07-05 Today I feel tired but I do nothing.Yseterday,I ran 9km to keep my body shape~I met an old friend in gym.She told me that her boss didn't give her salary for 3 month!I can't believe it! I a

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2015-07-05 Today I feel tired but I do nothing.Yseterday,I ran 9km to keep my body shape~I met an old friend in gym.She told me that her boss didn't give her salary for 3 month!I can't believe it! I added her wechat and told her if she need help,she call me.In the evening,she sent me a message to thanks me. I hope I can go to sleep earlier tonight~

2015년 7월 5일 오후 12:54

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2015-07-05

Today I feel tired but I did nothing. Yesterday, I ran 9km to keep my body in shape~I met an old friend at the gym. She told me that her boss didn't give her her salary for 3 months!I can't believe it! I added her to wechat and told her if she needs help, she can call me. In the evening, she sent me a message to thanks me.
I hope I can go to sleep earlier tonight~

(Not bad! You mostly need to work on your particles and verb agreement :) )

2015년 7월 5일

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