Concert Hi Pat, Do you want to go at a concert with my friends this evening? The concert it`ll be perfect because there will be rock music and play the pop band you like! The concert will be in the

Miriam

Concert Hi Pat, Do you want to go at a concert with my friends this evening? The concert it`ll be perfect because there will be rock music and play the pop band you like! The concert will be in the theatre at 11:00 p.m. See you soon, Miriam

2015년 7월 6일 오전 11:42

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Concert

Hi Pat,
Do you want to go to a concert with my friends this evening? The concert will be perfect because there will be rock music and the pop band you like will be there!
The concert will be in the theatre at 11:00 p.m.
See you soon,
Miriam

Well written, just a few points to fix :)

2015년 7월 6일