Armando
My first international travel: Los Cabos - Mexico Hello, Today I will tell about my first international travel. It was in November of 2013, I went to Los Cabos, Mexico. This place is the paradise, it is so beautiful. I stayed for one week in RIO Resort, where I met many people from United States, Canada and Mexico, but how I did not speak english, my contact was very limited. Futhermore, I loved the food with much pepper. It is unforgettable travel!
2015년 7월 7일 오후 9:10
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My first international travel: Los Cabos - Mexico

Hello,
Today I will talk about my first international travel.
It was in November of 2013, I went to Los Cabos, Mexico. This place is the paradise, it is so beautiful.
I stayed for one week in a RIO Resort, where I met many people from United States, Canada and Mexico, but how I did not speak english, my contact was very limited.
Futhermore, I loved the food with much a lot of pepper.
It is was an unforgettable travel trip!

 

Only a few minor errors. Great grammar! I would say keep it up! Your english is pretty good :)

2015년 7월 7일
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