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Changeable Weather Of Germany The temperature in Germany reached over 37 degrees at some point last weekend. However, it became much cooler over the past 4 days. But, I heard that it is going to be hot again in this weekend! How changeable German weather is! I am not used to it and I can't be. It is very surprising to me as it changes so often. It is not very common in Korea I would say. My German friends told me that Germany has a mild summer. But, I was really dying of heat last weekend. The most interesting thing I have ever seen in Germany was one day it was raining, snowing, icying? and sunny at the same time. I was thinking like how is this possible?. But, I still love German weather even though it changes so much. The summer of Germany is obviously not as hot as Korean one and Winter is not as cold as Korean one too.

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Changeable Weather Of Germany

The temperature in Germany reached over 37 degrees at one point last weekend. However, it became much cooler over the past 4 days but I heard that it is going to be hot again this weekend! How changeable German weather is! I am not used to it and I can't become used to it. It is very surprising to me as it changes so often. It is not very common in Korea I would say. My German friends told me that Germany has a mild summer. I was really dying from the heat last weekend.

The most interesting thing I have ever seen in Germany was one day it was raining, snowing, sleeting and then sunny at the same time. I was thinking "how is this possible? but I still love German weather even though it changes so much. The summer in Germany is obviously not as hot as a Korean one and winter is not as cold as Korean one.

 

[Very well written. Be care of your use of prepositions like 'on' or 'to'. The word 'but' does not start a sentence but joins two sentences together. You do not use a comma after the word 'but'.]

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