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Karen Lorena
What does be successful means? When I think about the future, immidiately I think about me and about who I want to become some years later. Obviously I want to be a successful woman. And it is in this moment when I ask myself what success is. In one hand, many people could say that success is be famous and rich. On the other hand some people could think success is have a good job and a beautiful family and friends. Altought, I believe success goes further. Sometimes we have all the things we wanted to have but we are sad and empty. In my point of view, be successful is to be happy how you are and with what you have even you don’t have anything. Be successful is about doing things using your abilities to help people and make them happy too. So, when I think about my future, I think about I want to leave a mark in the hummanity and teach people that being friendly, caring, humble, honest and helping others, they could be successful.

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What does it mean to be successful?

 

When I think about the future, I immediately think about myself and about the person I want to become in the future. Obviously I want to be a successful woman.  And it is in this moment that I ask myself what success is.


On one hand, many people could say that success is being famous and rich. On the other hand some people could think success is having a good job and a beautiful family and friends.


However, I believe success goes further. Sometimes we have all the things we want to have but we are sad and empty. My point of view is that success is to being happy with how you are and with what you have, even if you don’t have anything.


Being successful is about using your abilities to help people and make them happy too. So, when I think about my future, I think about how I want to leave a mark on humanity and teach people that being friendly, caring, humble, honest and helping others is true success.

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What it means to be successful ?

When I think about the future, immediately I think about myself and about who I want to become some years later. Obviously I want to be a successful woman. And in this moment, I ask myself what success is.
On one hand, many people could say that success is to be famous and rich. On the other hand, some people could think success is to have a good job and a beautiful family and friends.
Although, I believe success goes further. Sometimes we have all the things we wanted to have but we are sad and empty.
From my point of view, to be successful is to be happy with who you are and what you have. Even if you don’t have anything. Being successful is about doing things with your abilities to help people and make them happy too. So, when I think about my future, I think about leaving a mark on humanity and teach people that being friendly, caring, humble, honest and helping others, they could be successful.

 

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Hi Karen, I have to say you that I like so much your post... Is the real life... The success is not only have material staff. Have nice day girl..

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