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The first entry))) Hello, My name is Julia, I'm from Russia, I'm 19 years old, a student, I want to help me with English)))

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Corrections in red; stylistics in blue.


My first entry)))

Hello, my name is Julia. I'm from Russia.  I'm 19 years old, and a student. I want [1] you/someone to help me with English))).   

 

[1] "I want" is a little too strong.  Try this instead:  "I would like to find someone to help me with English."

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hello julia I can help you my fb is https://www.facebook.com/luishenrique1517 if you want we can speak english for train good luck
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Bruno: "I'm looking for someone....." The use of the present continuous suggests that that Julia is actively seeking a language partner right now. // ..... if I'm SAYING something wrong.
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Welcome Julia, Im new here too, hope we can improve our English together. One observation about your phrase: "... I want SOMEONE to help me..." or "I LOOK FOR PEOPLE to help me..." please native English people corrrect me if Im talking something wrrong. One more time, welcome Julia.))

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