Anna
After work ...
Today, after work I went to the beach. There I saw a beautiful sunset, and people bathing in the sea waves and sunlight)
2015년 7월 22일 오후 7:32
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After work ...
Today, after work I went to the beach. There I saw a beautiful sunset, and people bathing in the sea waves and sunlight)
Not really a correction, but this is my version:
After work today, I went to the beach. In the evening sunshine I saw people enjoying the sea before a beautiful sunset.
This is because the photo was some time before sunset.
2015년 8월 3일
Well, maybe the sunshine and people bathing in the foto hard to see, but I ask believe eyewitness - they are there)))
2015년 7월 26일
Great photo but no sunlight or sunbathing :)
2015년 7월 25일
Thanks, I'm glad you like it)))
2015년 7월 22일
Hi..nice pic!! .greetings
2015년 7월 22일
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