Stefano
All young people should continue at school or college until at least the age of 18. Do you agree? In Italy students are obliged to attend school until they are 16; after that age they can chose if go on with their studies or leave school and possibly start working. I believe that young people should continue attending school at least until they are 18. There are two main reason for encouraging young people to stay at school. Firstly, because they get qualifications that can be useful to find job more easily afterward. Then, school gives students the opportunity to learn competences and skills that enable them to overcome with the difficult situations they will have to face when will be adults. On the other end unmotivated students don't see the school as an opportunity to improve their abilities and education, but waste their time doing nothing. Furthermore they often disturb the lessons and prevent their classmates from listening to the teacher. In conclusion I think that it's a mistake for young people to leave school too early because they could miss the chance to get a better work in the future and, last but not least, I believe that a man with a higher level of culture is a richer man too.
2015년 7월 26일 오후 8:16
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All young people should continue at school or college until at least the age of Young People Should Continue Going To School Or College Until At Least The Age Of 18. Do you agree?

In Italy, students are obliged to attend school until they are 16; after that age they can chose if they want to go on with their studies, or leave school and possibly start working. I believe that young people should continue attending school at least until they are 18.

There are two main reasons for encouraging young people to stay at in school. Firstly, because they get qualifications, that can be useful to find jobs more easily afterward. Then, school gives students the opportunity to learn competences and new skills that enable them to overcome with the difficult situations they will have to face when they will be adults.

On the other end, unmotivated students don't see the school as an opportunity to improve their abilities and education, but a waste their time doing nothing. Furthermore, they often disturb the lessons and prevent their classmates from listening to the teacher.

In conclusion, I think that it's a mistake for young people to leave school too early because they could miss the chance to get a better work job in the future and, last but not least, I believe that a man with a higher level of culture education is will be a richer man too.

 

Not a bad job Stefano, this was very well written with just a few minor mistakes, overall you did a great job writing this! Personally, I agree with your reasons and suggestions, young people should stay in school longer to get a better education. As always my friend, please let me know if you have any questions!

2015년 7월 26일

All young people should continue at school or college until at least the age of 18. Do you agree?

In Italy students are obliged to attend school until they are 16; after that age they can choose if either to go on with their studies or to leave school and possibly start working. I believe that young people should continue attending school at least until they are 18.

There are two main reasons for encouraging young people to stay at school. Firstly, because they get qualifications that can be useful to find job more easily afterward. Then, school gives students the opportunity to learn competences and skills that enable them to overcome with the difficult situations they will have to face when will be adults.

On the other end hand, unmotivated students don't see the school as an opportunity to improve their abilities and education, but waste their time doing nothing. Furthermore they often disturb the lessons and prevent their classmates from listening to the teacher.

In conclusion, I think that it's a mistake for young people to leave school too early because they could miss the chance to get a better work in the future and, last but not least, I believe that a man with a higher level of culture is a richer man too.

OBS: overcome something means to solve a problem, get over a obstacle and overcome with means overwhelmed with something, be extremely fulfilled with something love, hatred, fear...

By the way, I totally agree with you, because if we have no education everything gets harder!

2015년 7월 26일
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