Jorge Polentino
talk about pets Today I was remembering my pet. I had a Labrador Retriever dog, He was gold, I used to walk with him and run too, He was more that a animal , He was a friend. Everytime that I watch the movie "Marley and Me" I remember him, to the reason I have wrote this note. Regards be careful your pets
2015년 7월 30일 오전 7:18
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A talk about pets

Today I was remembering my pet. I had a Labrador Retriever dog, he was golden, and I used to walk with him and run too. He was more than an animal, he was a friend. Everytime that I watch the movie "Marley and Me" I remember him, to the reason which is why I have wrote written this note. Regards (in english, we do not use "regards" often) be careful (with?) your pets.

 

Very good english, good job!

2015년 7월 30일
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