Samira
motivation Nobady can deney that motivation is something very important for us to acheive our goals so if everyone found motivation and encouraged it would be easy for him to get what he want...
2015년 7월 31일 오전 1:04
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Thank you sir!
2015년 8월 1일

motivation

Nobady can deny that motivation is something very important for us to acheive our goals. So if everyone found motivation and encouragement it would be easy [for him to get what he want...]

 

General Notes:

--Encouragement is the noun form of encourage. Since you said 'motivation' and you are including additional factors, they would also be nouns within a list.

--I'm unsure of what your final statement is meant to imply. Your sentences all speak of 'us' and 'everyone' but your final statement refers to 'him/he'. If you are referring to everyone, the final statement would be more like "...it would be easy to get what we want."

2015년 7월 31일
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