Mario Guerrero
Mi día hasta ahora Today, I woke up at 10:30 am. I have breakfast, I ate two pieces of chiken and one glass of choclate milk!! Then I played agar.io with my little sister, and then I'm here writing this hopping someone correct my mistakes :D!!
2015년 7월 31일 오후 10:04
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Mi día hasta ahora

Today, I woke up at 10:30 am. I had breakfast. I ate two pieces of chicken and one glass of chocolate milk!!
Then, I played agar.io with my little sister. Now, I'm here writing this hoping someone will correct my mistakes :D!!

 

Nice job :D

2015년 7월 31일
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Corrección en rojo; Estilística en azul.

Mi día hasta ahora

I ate two pieces of chicken and drank a/one glass of chocolate milk!!

 

Diga "one" si es importante hacer hincapié en que se trata de uno (no de dos, tres, etc.).  Si se trata de uno, pero no es importante recalcar que es uno (y no algún otro número), diga "a".

 

 

2015년 8월 1일
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