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I don't understand why my son doesn't like to go to the sea
I live in Israel in Netanya near the Mediterranean sea.But my son doesn't like to go to the sea. I don't understand why. Today I and my son my son and I went to the sea and had a good time together. We played and joked, threw some stones on the water, and saw the sunset. After this, we went to the home and my son told my me he loved this day on the beach. But I doubt that he will want to go more again.
Very good! Your English is well-written with a few small errors.
-When we say in English that we did something with someone else, we always list ourselves last.
ex: My son and I went to the sea.
She doesn't know my family and me.
-When we have a list of things, the last item should follow the word "and."
ex: I bought milk, eggs, and bread.
We sang, danced, and laughed all day.
-Don't forget to use your definite and indefinite articles!
Keep up the good work and if you have any questions, feel free to ask them!
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