Marshmallo
こんにちわ! わたしわ ひらがな あります。にほんごわ たも氏です! はんとに!わたしわ あめりかの じんせい です。いぢょです!^_^
2015년 8월 3일 오전 7:16
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I think you did a great job if this is the first one :)

Keep practicing and you'll get better and better!!

 

こんにち

わたしひらがなありますならわかります

にほんごのべんきょうたも氏おもしろいです

んとに!

わたしあめりかのじんせいじんです。

いぢょいじょうです!^_^

 

<em>[Quick Tips]</em>

(1) "ha" and "wa"

It's true that "は" right after the subject is pronouced like "wa".

But you should write ”は”, not "わ".

 

(2) "interesting"

The translation of "interesting" is "おもしろい [Omoshiroi]" or "きょうみぶかい [Kyoumibukai]".

And translation of "fun" is "たのしい".

 

2015년 8월 3일
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こんにちわ! 

わたしわ ひらがな あります。にほんごわ たも氏です! はんとに!わたしわ あめりかの じんせい です。いぢょです!^_^

 

Hello (Good afternoon)!

I only know hiragana. Japanese is really interesting! Really! I am from America as well. That is all!

 

*it is really short, but it's a start!*

2015년 8월 3일
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