María Ángeles
Mondays I remember an old song which chorus said “Tell me why I don´t like Mondays”, I suppose that for many people the pressure of coming back to unsatisfactory jobs or even routine skills reinforce the feeling of aversion for this day of the week. Nevertheless, in a sense, the idea of that something new begins could help to see the outlook in a more optimistic way. So, today is Monday and all could be wonderful because I am with a very positive attitude.
2015년 8월 3일 오전 7:25
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Mondays

I remember an old song which chorus said “Tell me why I don´t like Mondays”. I suppose that for many people the pressure of coming back to unsatisfactory jobs or even routine skills reinforces the feeling of aversion for this day of the week. Nevertheless, in a sense, the idea of new beginnings could help to see the outlook in a more optimistic way (produce a more optimistic outlook). So, today is Monday and all could be wonderful because I have a very positive attitude.

 

Your writing is excellent. There was little to correct/suggest here. A slight alteration in the order and a slightly different selection of words (green) help it's flow, I think. Hope this helps ;)

2015년 8월 6일
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