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my new language In my opinion friendship is the main component in our life i think there is no body have the ability to be happy without having some friends at least one . with friends we can help us in our work a...
2015년 8월 4일 오후 11:35
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Well done!


My main feedback is to ensure that you when you use a full stop, you put it directly at the end of sentence, then use 1 space, and then start the next word with a capital letter. E.g. Hello, my name is Tom. I am 28 years old. I live in Colombia.

 

Good luck! Tom


My new language

 

In my opinion, friendship is the main component in our life. I think there is that nobody has the ability to be happy without having some friends, at least one. With friends we can be helped with our work. help us in our work a...

2015년 8월 5일
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